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Andrew, There are only ten plots and every story follows one of them, so I don't know that we can say that we have a strong plot until the story is written and we see how it goes. Take romance novels for example. Most romance novels follow the same…
December 2
After a while, the characters become very real to me. It is rather strange, but I feel like they are real people who's lives are in limbo if I don't write.
December 2
Words of wisdome, follower. I personally love caring about pretend people. ;)
December 2
When the events flow out of the motivations and goals of the characters, the plot is a strong one. If you're just putting your characters through one tension filled scene after another, that's not going to move me as much as if I care about the char…
December 2
December 1
Makes sense to me. I never sit down to write a story until I have a basic plot in my head. So far everyone says my books are page turners so I must be plotting them well enough to hold a reader's interest.
November 1
form Merriam-Websters Online Main Entry: 1plot Pronunciation: \ˈplät\ Function: noun Etymology: Middle English, from Old English Date: before 12th century 1 a : a small area of planted ground b : a small piece of land in a cemetery c : a measured…
November 1
In the words of Dan Inosanto, "Absorb what is useful". I think that is true of any craft/art/skill. King can be boorish, but he's also done some correct things during his career to be where he is (besides beeing boorish :-) I can't think of any boo…
October 19
You do have to get past the foul language and stuff. But what he says about writing is very true. I love how he talks about a story being like an archeological find and the writer's job is to unearth it bit by bit. And my favorite line comes when he…
October 18
He's definitely crass - I guess that's a better description of what I termed "unapologetic" :-) I do find it interesting to read about the habits of other authors however, and relate them to things I've discovered myself. One example from King is hi…
October 18
I didn't like King's On Writing. It was too crass for me. The situation with the poison ivy was funny, though.
October 18
I'll second Stephen King's On Writing. It's unapologetic on what makes a good story. He makes a good case of "telling the truth" also - characters will do what characters should do in a situation. If they're angry they may curse. If they are tempted…
October 18
I'm still new at this (just finishing my third, unpublished novel), but this is what floats around in my head when I sit down to write the opening scene. Primary characters are living and breathing in my head and on my character note cards. I see th…
October 14
Interesting . . . good feedback. It seems that a 'strong plot' is not so necessary if other attributes of your story are compelling all long the lines of 'tension' and '.situation'. I'll see if I can dig up the referenced books. Sounds like a good r…
October 12
Thanks, Michelle! I have to give credit where credit is due--a friend who read an early draft of my book pointed out to me that during a few of the middle chapters there wasn't enough tension. The word struck like a gong with me! I realized that was…
October 11
Kat's got the answer in the "literary" bag. :) It's all about tension.
October 11

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Science Fiction, Fantasy - Tolkien, C.S. Lewis, Perrtti
About Me:
Licensed Architect with a passion for writing.
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Andrew E Mitchell

An as yet unamed parable . . . . first few pages . . .

The snake hung silently in the tree silently, watching the lioness nurse her cubs. The snake’s head, plus a quarter of its length hang down from a thick horizontal bough. The remainder of its great length was intertwined in the tree’s limbs, moving only slightly, to shift the pressure of its great weight from one spot to another. As a standing man would shift his weight form one foot to another.

Its head, and the rest that dangled, swayed gently in a breeze that had occasional light gusts. The… Continue

Posted on September 22, 2009 at 11:15am —

Andrew E Mitchell

6th and final post on "The architect's Temptation"

"You will become god."

This being's delivery was smooth, lyrical, almost hypnotic. I felt a fervent desire to want to believe all that was being spoken to me. The entity was now silent, standing still and impassive, as if waiting for a reply.
The room also, was silent. The silence of the room was jarring in contrast to the lyrical flow of words that previously held me entranced.
That silence was sobering.
God?
Me?, Never!
There is but one GOD, but one Creator, all others are created. To HIM bel… Continue

Posted on August 29, 2009 at 5:59pm —

Andrew E Mitchell

"The Architect's Temptation" Fith Installment

Do the heavenlies have a sense of humor? It had always been a mystery to me. Yet the demise of the demon had all the aspects of a Saturday morning cartoon.
The two sides of the demon laid on the floor for a moment, wriggling like snakes. Then, in a flash of reddish light, it disappeared.

Or so I thought.

The smoke took a few moment to clear. As it cleared, I perceived a form within it. It was standing, appearing to be no bigger than a eight year old boy. Yet it soon became evident that this wa… Continue

Posted on August 26, 2009 at 4:50pm —

Andrew E Mitchell

"The Architect's Temptation" Fourth Installment

I began to pray.
I don't know why I did so. For it would seem apparent that my prayers were being answered by the presence of this Angelic being. Nonetheless, I quietly prayed. My prayers were at first rambling, nearly incoherent. What ever popped into my mind, I prayed for. The prayers progressed from a jumble of words, to phrases, to full sentences. My head was bowed slightly, my eyes downcast, barely open. I could perceive the fight beyond, now a blur of white and red forms.
After a bit, the… Continue

Posted on August 22, 2009 at 9:17am —

Andrew E Mitchell

The third installment

My spirit wilted. I felt helpless and hopeless. I had no defense. I waited passively to see what he would do next. I had not long to wait. With the claws of his free hand, he deftly removed the buttons on the lower portion of my shirt. He then, ever so lightly scratched a line from the top of my belt to just under my breastbone. A very fine line of blood appeared. In my fear and agony, something deep within my soul cried out. "Jesus, help me!"
Just as he was about to scratch again, the room bega… Continue

Posted on August 18, 2009 at 11:00am —

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At 9:29pm on August 10, 2009, Michelle Sutton said…
Welcome, Andrew! Glad to have you here!
 
 
 

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